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lot of craziness int eh world today….shaking….ash clouds…i wonder what she is trying to tell us…and if we will listen…
I’m happy someone commented one of my poems and I hope people do listen 🙂 The internet is a great way to try and reach out. Hopefully from your comment others will come and read and listen. Have a wonderful day!
lovely piece,
I like the color of purple…
you have a fun way with words.
Thank you 🙂
awesome poem there.. loved it very much..
apt usage of words… loved the purply background too 😀
im here from Jingle’s rally
you can check my poem at
Thanks :)! It will be my pleasure to read your poems, thanks for the link.
Interesting take on patience. Nicely done
get a chance visit another luna
moondustwriter.com
I’ll be more than happy to visit your page moondustwriter 🙂 and thanks for the comment!
This is great! I was hooked, lined and sunk 🙂
Thank you JStar :)! It always makes me happy to know my work is interesting and appreciated. I already went to your website and I have to compliment you as well. What you wrote with taste in your mind was very meaningful and true of life. I hope to keep reading, but I can’t find the subscribe button…can you help?
great writing seriously!
I’m so ecstatic at all the pleasant feedback 🙂 Thank you so much Fiveloaf. I’m happy you liked it and I have to say that you’re work is also very nice. I just read “outrun” and “sick audience”, very interesting. I love the style and the message definitely sparks the mind. I hope we can continue following each other.
This piece is just precise and well-worded…all you need to do is keep writing….
Have a look at my BLOG loaded with lovely emotional poems;
I will take a look at your blog 🙂 As soon as I’m done thanking you for the appreciative comments on my poem :)!
Yay Luna! What an AMAZING poem!! I love your originality!!
Very happy to hear you enjoyed it! Thanks 🙂
Very nice. I always love such impressionistic writing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Thank you blankwall! I look forward to reading more of yours too, I subscribed to your page a bit ago. Have a great day!
First off great work, and secondly welcome to the rally 🙂 hope to read more of your work soon in up coming rallys
I’m glad you liked what I wrote Shoelessboywonder and thanks for the rally welcome :). I look forward to keeping up with what you have to share with us too ;)!
thank you for joining us,
have fun!
😉
let me know if you have further questions.
Thank you Ji, for everything :). I’m happy to be a part of the group! And if I have any questions I will let you know. Have a great evening :).
I love the way you place these vivid ever strong images on a purple background. And amongsth those powerful images the most powerful verse is simple “moments speak” …truly awesome.
Thank you so much Suzicate :). To hear that my work is appreciated and liked has made my day a great one. I’m sure you get the same feeling when that happens. I look forward to sharing deep and meaningful writing with you and all the great writers that have shown an interest here today. I think we can all help each other become better writers and people. I hope you are having a great evening ;)!
Very nice poem I really like the way you build this poem. Great job! 🙂
http://karadouglas.wordpress.com
Thank you Kara 🙂 I can’t wait to check out your writing too! I’m sure it will be beautiful like your daisy picture…daisies make me think of joy and friendship.
i like how you used little words to express a lot of meaning 🙂 wonderful work.. 😀 well done
Thank you Oinky 🙂 I’m happy to know that.
This is just lovely or this there a word better than that?…Cheers!
Thanks Emmauel; you are very kind :)!
Well done.
Very honest and lovely words.
I really enjoyed that.
Happy Thursday!
Mine is here
hugs
shakira
Thanks Shakira 🙂 I’m going to go check out your link as soon as I’m done answering you. I hope you are having a lovely morning!
…and learn we shal!! 🙂
I truly hope so moondai 🙂
Nature has so much going on within herself …
beautifully worded 🙂 well written…
Thank you Rijlakshmi :). It’s good to hear that my efforts bring about good results. I enjoyed your work as well, I believe I left you a comment yesterday ;). Have a fantastic day!
I loved savoring this one, each lline a short story to stop and ponder over!
Excellent!!
Thank you very much Jannie Funster :)! I look forward to reading your work as well and sharing ideas.
simply beautiful.
Thanks trisha :)! You have some great poems as well and I love the graphic design.
terse and descriptive at once– good job!
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
🙂 Thank you Mairmusic. I try, my best.
a great use and association of words.well done
Thank you wordwand and good morning :)! Happy to hear you enjoyed it.
A nice image!
images, rather
Thank you BFG! Jingles gave them to the winners for the Thursday Poets’ Rally week 15 🙂
Here’s the link in case you wanted to check it out:
🙂 Have a nice day!!
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