I wrote this and first posted it on my MySpace blog on Oct 22, 2008 @ 22:49


placid oceans
ghastly winds
currents strong
inanimate waters
earthquakes shake
stillness still
rumbling within
magma flows
will break through
await the prey
moments speak
hard to catch
Gaea whispers
try to hear
still you sit
learn you must
it comes to you
placid oceans
await the prey
its course will show


48 comments on “Patience”

    1. I’m happy someone commented one of my poems and I hope people do listen πŸ™‚ The internet is a great way to try and reach out. Hopefully from your comment others will come and read and listen. Have a wonderful day!

    1. Thank you JStar :)! It always makes me happy to know my work is interesting and appreciated. I already went to your website and I have to compliment you as well. What you wrote with taste in your mind was very meaningful and true of life. I hope to keep reading, but I can’t find the subscribe button…can you help?

    1. I’m so ecstatic at all the pleasant feedback πŸ™‚ Thank you so much Fiveloaf. I’m happy you liked it and I have to say that you’re work is also very nice. I just read “outrun” and “sick audience”, very interesting. I love the style and the message definitely sparks the mind. I hope we can continue following each other.

    1. I’m glad you liked what I wrote Shoelessboywonder and thanks for the rally welcome :). I look forward to keeping up with what you have to share with us too ;)!

  1. I love the way you place these vivid ever strong images on a purple background. And amongsth those powerful images the most powerful verse is simple “moments speak” …truly awesome.

    1. Thank you so much Suzicate :). To hear that my work is appreciated and liked has made my day a great one. I’m sure you get the same feeling when that happens. I look forward to sharing deep and meaningful writing with you and all the great writers that have shown an interest here today. I think we can all help each other become better writers and people. I hope you are having a great evening ;)!

    1. Thank you Kara πŸ™‚ I can’t wait to check out your writing too! I’m sure it will be beautiful like your daisy picture…daisies make me think of joy and friendship.

    1. Thank you Rijlakshmi :). It’s good to hear that my efforts bring about good results. I enjoyed your work as well, I believe I left you a comment yesterday ;). Have a fantastic day!

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