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The coolest sea breeze
The luke warm water
The ocean’s aroma in the air
The warmth touches bodies
The wetness sits and waits
The blowing winds put all at peace
The heavenly town
The smiling faces
The relaxation bug is here to stay
It touches the face
It warms the heart
It relaxes the body
FNM
I nominate The Blank Wall for week 19 – Thursday Poets Rally
Thank you for this refreshing and relaxing breath of poetry.
Tim Keeton
(Undead) Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
I’m glad you liked it 😉
well done,
I love your style!
Thanks Jingle 🙂
wetness sits and waits —- very nice line of relaxation…..bkm
Thank you bkm 🙂 I’m glad that someone else was able to relax thanks to my poem 😉
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All of the sensory words really bring the scene to life. Great job! I can almost smell the ocean and feel that breeze.
Also, thanks for the kind words on my poem 🙂
🙂 I only shared my thoughts. Thanks for the comment as well 😉
LOvely poem. Heartspell
Thanks 🙂
This Poem relaxes the body, putting the mind in the lovely scene you created in the Poem…Nicely written.
I’m happy I succeeded in my intent 🙂 Thanks Emmanuel.
Just awesome. wonderful poem, so full of rest and peace.
Thank you Trisha 🙂 I’m happy to hear that!!!
this is excellent
Thanks Artswebshow 🙂 It is always nice to hear ones work is appreciated and liked ;).
Please visit poets who were here for you to return compliments,
plus,
let me know after you have commented for 12 fresh poets.
many thanks.
Hey Jingle I visited 12 fresh poets the other day. I put the post on the page for Thursday Poets Rally week 19. Did you want me to visit other 12 poets? Let me know 🙂
oh that was a breath of fresh air…thanks for the gentle roll into the weekend…nicely done.
I’m glad you enjoyed it Brian and I hope your weekend is filled with relaxation 🙂 Thanks
I like this one; tercets always grab me. You’ve painted a picture just a few words, which many aspiring poets struggle to do. Nice one
Best,
More than Luke Warm
Thank you More than Luke Warm. I’m happy to know that I expressed myself well and that what I wrote is appreciated and liked. 🙂
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